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Red and Yellow Tulips from my bouquet...

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© Silvia Colombo . 2009
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Critiques


:iconbypass2020:
That's stunning to be honest, fabulous detail, colouration and depth. I don't really have anything other than a few minor points in response to the submission of this great piece.

There are only two things that let it down in my humble opinion. Firstly your choice of background which, whilst being rustic, detracts from the subject. The horizontal and vertical lines are relatively stark and the distortion of them drags the eye away.A more delicately texture background (of a similar colour) would have been perfect as the colour is great and the showing at the bottom also helps to frame the base of the flowers.

Secondly, a small adjustment in lighting and exposure compensation might have helped negate the burnt area of highlight on the yellow tulip.

Two small points, everything else is fabulous. Well done.
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Very nicely done!

First, I have to say that the colors are magnificent. The way the flowers blend in with the background, which is also excellent, really makes this a wonderful image. I could have sworn that this was a painting before I saw the full view, and even then I wasn't sure. It seems so perfect; you get a real country feeling from the image.

The flowers themselves are very nicely arranged as well. There are not too many that they over-power the image. The leaves on the stems are a nice addition, since they add more of a wild feel to the flowers (in other words, they are not all nicely arranged like you might see in other images. Instead they look like they were picked right in the field and placed here). You supported the concept of the whole shot beautifully.

The only critique I could give is that I wish the tiles on the right side didn't curve a bit, and instead were flat like the left side. But this is really a nit-picky thing, since it still works very well with the image.

Overall, I applaud your work. Great job!!
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:iconfemketje:
very lovely

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:iconwhitedove18:
Wow... This is stunning! It's absolutely flawless. :aww: :+fav:!

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Praise God!
:iconblueskye27:
You've been featured here. :heart:
:iconwishmasteralchemist:
:wow: Thank you so much! It's greatly appreciated! :dance:

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I like the colours of this picture :thumbsup: .
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:iconkatj:
You have really touched me, by creating the first ever still life that remains stuck in my mind, after half an hour. It's captivating. In your entire gallery I love your use of colours, and this.. This is just striking. Loving every bit of it.

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:iconwishmasteralchemist:
Thank you so much for this enthusiastic comment and for the :+fav:!
I'm glad you liked it! =D

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:icondiamondscan:
Oh man, this is stunning! Such rich colors and saturation, the tone throughout the whole thing is very real. Great work. :)

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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :XD:

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